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Published on May 11, 2004 By Shulamite In Blogging
I've noticed in IMing friends and on Joe here, several people try the rhetorical device of "sarcasm" for their arguments.

I know I cannot possibly be the only person who has noticed this. Sarcasm doesn't work in writing.

We write like we speak and just assume others will read what we write the same way we'd speak it. Not so. In fact, rarely so. Sometimes, we use sarcasm and the other person thinks we're serious. Or thinks we're sarcastic but doesn't want to suffer embarrasment in case we're serious. But also doesn't want to be laughed at for taking us serious. So the point is just dropped awkwardly or responded to in both cases. It's always difficult.

Other times, we dont' use sarcasm, but it's read into what we wrote. Don't you HATE when that happens? Often the sarcasm that's read into what you wrote stains your point with hostility and makes it into something its not. The reader becomes defensive and hostile in return and any chance for an intelligent conversation quickly disinigrates like my dog's rawhide chewtoys.

I propose we initiate some guidelines. Some kind of early warning system letting people know we're using sarcasm. I know it would take the fun out of it, but it would help to clarify things! Make us easier to understand -- and that has to be a communication goal; a communication value that's higher than form itself. Fashion vs. Function.

For future reference, I'm never sarcastic without me saying so when I write. So be sure you read my writing / commentary like a carebear would have said it. It'll make more sense... in some weird way. More on that later.

Comments
on May 12, 2004
"Sarcasm doesn't work in writing."

Hello? Ever heard of a man named Oscar Wilde? Master of sarcasm in the written form.

Also, it's usually pretty obvious when people are being sarcastic. It takes a higher level of intelligence to understand sarcasm, no doubt about it.

And I think I'm pretty good at deciphering the way an author wants somethin to be read. It's part of the joy of reading.
on May 12, 2004
What I meant to say was:

Sarcasm? What's that?
on May 12, 2004
Unfairman -- what I was referring to, and I apologize if I wasn't as clear as I thought I was being, is that when you're making an argument in the form of a comment, sarcasm doesn't work. Oscar Wilde used more than sarcasm. He used humor. And his point was made within a body of work of substantial length. Notice the title: sarcasm and the internet. Comments to others in the form of rude sarcastic remarks usually aren't read the correct way. Did you just skim my article? Read the rest and you'll see what I mean.

As an English major, I'm fully aware of authors like Swift who were skillful at their craft. But for every Swift, there's 20 failures at sarcasm, if not more.

I'm not sure what you meant by "it takes a higher level of intellegence to understand sarcasm." I understand it and use it well in life. But I have enough intelligence and enough experience in communication classes (taking and teaching them as well as a competing) to know that sarcasm is a difficult tool to use properly and one can almost always find a preferential way of making a point -- especially when the communication goal is clarity. Only wit value is augmented by sarcasm. Run a quick cost/benefit analysis on that: wit verses clarity. If you can keep clarity AND get the wit, then the sarcasm is valid. if you can't keep the clarity, I say the wit (sarcasm) has to go. Can you grasp that concept?
on May 12, 2004
Good points Shulamite. Far too often people (poorly) use sarcasm in their written work, especially online. It does translate, but only by those who are especially adept at weilding it, and there are far too many who attempt and fail. And, as you pionted out, this often leads to embarassment and/or hurt feelings.

And, of course, there are times when people, in the heat of the moment, type something particularly stupid or hasty, only to later try to cover it by saying they were being sarcastic.

To that end, my suggestion would be thus, as I have seen it work in other arenas. We could use sarcastic green. Things typed in green could be known to be sarcastic comments. No, it isn't the perfect solution, but one I have seen work in other places online. Though it would appear my attempt to only use green for a portion of my post was thwarted. Short of using the actual html for it, it may not be possible to have a portion of the text a different color. Perhaps Brad could let us know if that was possible.
on Jun 01, 2004
Yes, I wanted to use portions of writing in colors, like for links, et cetera. But that's cool. I do think colorcoding sarcasm is a very good idea. Then there's no excuse for later saying "oh well I was just being sarcastic."

Again, when wit or sarcasm clashes with clarity, one must go for clarity. That's all I'm saying. Thanks BlueDev. Also, thanks for reminding me to check your site out. I've enjoyed what you've written so far...